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For
Teachers
Our best teaching tip:
check out the
National
Writing Project,
and find the location of your local Writing
Project. Most offer Summer Institutes for teachers.
The National Writing Project is all about "teachers
teaching teachers," working to improve their own
writing and pass on their love of writing to their
students.
How do you get students
interested in writing?
Glen teaches elementary school, and starts his year
by talking to his students about his own writing.
"I used to have these dreams when I was that age,"
he says, "And when I'd wake up, I'd write them
down. I kept whole notebooks of dreams." He tells
his students how he'd take his dreams and work them
into stories, sometimes typing them up on an old
typewriter. "Sometimes I'd really get going on a
story, and I'd think, 'Wow, I've written twenty
pages! That's almost a novel!'" He may also show
students some of the work he's written and
published. The purpose of this is to show students
that writing isn't just a schoolroom exercise --
that writing is something that "real" people do,
every day, and not just because someone tells them
to. As a teacher, sharing your own writing
experiences with students shows your students that
writing isn't just something that you inflict on
them, but is something that you do, too.
A writing
workspace
Glen has students write in a dedicated writing
notebook. It can be a spiral-bound notebook, but
the ideal writing notebook is a good old-fashioned
hard-cover composition book, the kind with the
black and white mottled cover. The stiff card
binding gives a firm writing surface so that
students can write anywhere. These can be purchased
cheaply in bulk at an office supply store and sold
to students at cost. A writing notebook keeps all
of a student's writing collected in one spot,
instead of scattered about. Final work may be
copied onto clean paper, but the notebook itself is
a workspace where students can list ideas, work on
ideas, and track their own writing.
Much of what students write
in their notebooks comes from their own ideas. When
students own the idea, they are much more
interested in writing about it than if they have a
prompt or an idea assigned to them. They may balk
at the idea of writing a story from the viewpoint
of a tree when the teacher tells them to, but may
happily write the story of a bug in that tree if
it's their own idea to do so.
Students use their writing
notebooks every day. Unlike riding a bicycle,
writing isn't something you learn once and never
forget. The more you practice, the better you get
at it, and writing daily helps develop whatever
neural connections form during the act of creation
and reinforces the connections.
Word lists
Before his students embark on a year of writing,
Glen asks them what nouns are. Students start
listing nouns, and he writes them on the board. At
first they think of commonplace nouns, such as
cat, dog, and chair. After they
exhaust the obvious, they start thinking of more
unusual things: lemon, aardvark, sofa. Then
they'll do the same with verbs and adjectives. In
the back of their writing notebooks, students keep
lists of nouns, verbs, and adjectives so they
always have lists of interesting words
handy.
The word list can be the
point of departure for the first stories that his
students write. Glen may ask students to pick a
noun and and adjective from their list, and create
a story around their choice, be it an invisible
toilet or a freckled fishbowl. Because
they have chosen their own silly combination,
students usually have a good time writing about it.
They also have an endless source of writing prompts
of their own creation, so there's never a time when
they can use "I don't know what to write about" as
an excuse. See our new random writing
prompt generator
that uses the same idea!
Modeling
The students aren't the only ones writing in their
notebooks during writing time. Glen carries his
laptop to school and writes alongside them. He
always has some project going, whether it's working
on an assigned nonfiction book, or crafting a
novel. Again, this shows that writing isn't just a
schoolroom activity done to please the teacher, but
is an activity that anyone can engage in for
pleasure or as a profession. When students share
their work, Glen sometimes shares some of his,
too.
Coffee House
The most important writing activity that Glen uses
is Coffee House, an idea he got from Dr. Robin
Fromherz of Willamette University, originally as an
interesting replacement for show and tell. In the
days of the Beat poets, coffee houses were a place
where poets would get up in front of a microphone
and read their poetry aloud to an appreciative
audience. Coffee House is a weekly activity in
which students share their own writing by reading
it aloud. The audience responds with applause or
with a simple, "Thank you." Glen puts a tall stool
in front of the room, and begins the first Coffee
House of the year by sharing pieces from his own
writing to model the process. Students may then
volunteer to read something from their writing
notebooks. No one has to share, but once Coffee
House time is established, even shy students grow
more and more eager to share their writing. Because
there is no judgement and no critique, students
feel safe.
The purpose of Coffee House
is to give students a larger audience for their
writing. When their only audience is the teacher,
the constant question is, "Is this good enough?"
What they are asking is, "Have I written just
enough to get a good grade? Have I done just enough
of what the teacher wants?" When their audience is
extended to a larger group, be it their own peers,
their parents during Open House, or an even wider
community via web publishing, text publishing,
blogging -- or the state writing tests -- students
learn to assess their own work. "Good enough" is no
longer good enough. They strive to achieve the best
because when the public is looking, they want to
look good. Some students create long works, with an
ongoing novel-length story that they share chapters
or excerpts from during Coffee House time.
Another teacher we know
turned Coffee House into Cocoa House when parent
volunteers in her class started bringing in cocoa
and cookies, turning sharing time into a special
event.
Cowboy Bob and Zippy the
Man from Mars
Part of the teaching practice at Glen's school is
Daily Oral Language, which is used to teach writing
conventions. Teachers write several unpunctuated
sentences on the board, and the class is asked to
help place the punctuation and capitalizations
correctly. There may also be noun-verb
disagreements and other grammatical errors that
students need to correct. Once the passage is
finished, students copy it into their
notebooks.
But DOL can be a dull
exercise if it uses dull sentences. Glen spiced it
up by throwing away suggested sentences about "The
boy played baseball" and replacing them with an
ongoing story about Cowboy Bob and Zippy the Man
from Mars. "I'm not sure how well students transfer
this to their own writing," Glen says. "I'm still
working on that part, and it would be interesting
to study." Students do, however, pay closer
attention to the exercise when the story is
interesting and their teacher has made it up just
for them.
To help students transfer
the DOL exercise to their own writing and editing,
Glen sometimes asks students to volunteer some of
their own writing for a class editing exercise.
After removing the student's name from a writing
sample, he puts it on an overhead and asks the
class to help edit the work. Editing may begin with
a DOL-style search for mistakes in punctuation, but
may extend to more intensive critiques, with
suggestions for rephrasing sentences or creating a
more punchy ending.
Writing to Learn
Karen teaches college biology, and doesn't have as
much opportunity to teach writing -- though her
students often need considerable help in learning
to organize and write reports without naively
plagiarizing the whole thing from web pages! She
does, however, use writing almost daily in class in
the form of Writing to Learn exercises. Most
Writing to Learn activities involve quick, informal
writing to help students clarify their own ideas,
uncover misconceptions, or organize new
knowledge.
One simple activity is the
Think-Pair-Share. Karen may begin class with a
question on the overhead ("How do you know if
something is living or not?" "If a widow's peak
hairline is a dominant trait, does that mean that
someday all people will have a widow's peak
hairline?") and ask students to write out their
best answer. When class begins, students turn to
one another, share their answers, and discuss them.
Then when she's ready to ask students for their
ideas, all students have something written in front
of them to share. She may collect the papers as a
quick assessment and misconceptions check. For more
Writing to Learn ideas, download the
Writing
to Learn Handout
that Karen uses when teaching Writing to Learn
workshops.
Writing to Learn and other
forms of integrated writing are making their way
into school curricula. One outstanding example is
the Reading,
Writing, and Rings
curriculum developed by the Bay Area Writing
Project in cooperation with NASA and Jet Propulsion
Laboratories. Reading, Writing, and Rings is a
language arts and science crossover curriculum that
grew out of the Cassini-Huygens mission to Saturn.
The materials can be downloaded for free. Karen
attended a presentation of this curriculum at a
National Writing Project conference and was
impressed by the quality of the student work. One
second-grader, when writing about Saturn as a
pre-test, could barely get out a couple of wobbly
sentences. By the end of the unit, the same second
grader wrote out two whole pages -- and didn't want
to stop!
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